Well, my stomach lurched when I first viewed your photo (and I just finished my lunch) :-) Fun perspective, but the grates and lines are just a bit distracting.
You know, I hate saying this because I think this photo has a lot of potential...there's just too much stuff going on here - in the way of lines and grids and how those varying lines and grids all have different perspectives and vanishing points...in other words, it lacks focus. I might suggest next time doing a shot like this actually pulling yourself away so that there's not so much distraction.
The (mostly) horizontal lines are very distracting, particularly since they cut through the only person who's trying to attract attention to himself. I think that you may have been better off cloning out the offending bar, even if it also required removing the person.