I attribute this to artistic license, but it doesn't do anything for me, sorry. I think maybe if it was a little less red, and showed some contrast it might be a little better. Also, a touch more focus is needed, especially on the nose area.
Looks more like a sneeze or something...? I'm afraid this one just isn't too appealing for my tastes... the expression and coloring are just a bit too overwhelming.
If this is a serious entry, try moving the model away from the light a bit to not get that nasty glare. This looks like a full color shot with a red light and not a duotone shot.
This is not a particularly attractive, in focus or interesting photo. The red is absolutely horrendous in my opinon. I'm wondering why you chose to enter this photo? For this one, I think it works best for me to say, "I just don't get it"
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