I think the most effective parts of this picture is the fact that it "draws" you to the center, and that the color is so vibrant. The repeating pattern of the diminishing circles really helps to move the eyes into the picture. It gives the feeling of being sucked in (which from what I understand about the movie is appropriate). Also the green gives that "computer" feeling somehow.
I think more focus, or having something at the end of the circles to focus on would help hold attention more. As it is now, the eyes go to the center, and there is nothing else there to see. Also, even though it doesn't look "out" of focus, it does seem to have a lot of clarity either. Finally, I think a more squarish crop, rather than the horizontal one would help emphasize your circles more.
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