Lets just say that I find this shot original compared to all the other boring screen shots of the challenge.
COLOR & FOCUS: Color is spot on and as for focus, not much of a factor here sicne movement was intended to create bluring.
THEME: respected!
COMPOSITION: Your settup was simple yet effective. The long sutte speed was a great idea and you seemed to have gotten your desired effect! Great! Even though you were original with this type of shot, the WOW factor is limited. For this type of shot, I don't see how it could be improved.
Despite being 'just' a photo of a screen (I assume), I like this a lot. Great work on the zoom effect, it creates a great impression of 3D, and without it the score would be near the other end of the scale. 10
the green wording were scattered, make the pic look so empty. the empty and the black part on right should be off from this pic. Somehow, the flying effect from the wording does deserve to get high score from me ^ ^
I'm guessing this is a focus-pull type shot of a matrix screen saver. It's quite an interesting shot and very well executed (assuming no rules were broken).