Good leading lines. There seems to be a bit of a yellowish cast on it, though. Without that, thus making the colors brighter, I think this would be an excellent shot!
The yellow tone could be worked on with some selective desat under the white category. Since there is so much variety of color, this might work better as black and white and go for the contrast as well as the linear quality of it.
this shot fits the challenge well but for some reason i'm not that drawn in by it...i'll look at it again in he next couple of day and let u know why but right now i can't put my finger on it.....
2nd thougth-i think its 2 clutered and lacks a sence of form