nice shot but I think it would have been better if the bread was actually grilled and maybe a different angle on the image... The cheese just looks melted from the microwave?...
This is a really neat photograph. I like how te cheese is coming ot of the bread. Although, the bread looks dry, so it turned me off a little. There aren't alot of colors to draw you in, maybe next time someting a little spicier? I just got a bit bored.
food shots are so hard! this one seems to have too much green in it? the shadow on the top almost looks like mold - I admire you trying, you gave yourself a hard task, but this doesn't look appetizing to me.