Interesting perspetive. I think it could have been improved by either more depth of field to have her face in focus or less depth of field to throw her face more out of focus. Good work.
The lighting here is very nice with shadows and contrast but no loss of detail. I would have experimented with a different angle to fill one of the top corners and help make the negative space more appealing. Right now the legs split right through the center which makes it hard for my eyes to decide where to go when they get to the top.
I feel that this is too dark. I think the focus should have been on her face. I think I would have liked that better. But that is just my opinion. Good luck.
I like the lighitng, focus, and dof. I'm deciding if I'm partial to the crop, which I think means I like it. I'd like to see the shot without the feet crossed. Nice tonal range and interesting hue. I like it.
Nice tones and composition but I think you could have cropped or faded out more from the belly button down because up to that point, everything is so smooth and soft looking.
I love the idea of this shot. My only tiny gripe is the model's body is slightly out of line with center. I think that this idea can look good with either the body centered perfectly to create a comfortable symmetry, or make the body significantly off center and maybe lay it along a strong diagonal or lay it straight vertical on one of the vertical 3rds lines. The DOF is interesting, and the shot could look good with a much deeper DOF too. The model's face is quite attractive, so keeping it in focus I believe would add interest to the shot. Good job.
I think this might have been more effective with just the focused body in the shot and not the blurred face. I think it would still work without it and then more of it would be sharp. The lighting and pose is nicely done.
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