You got a very good/sharp stop action shot. However, lighting isn't up there yet. There is too many (and quite strong) shadows all around. That's a big negative I think. Try using diffuse lighting and/or multiple light source to cut down shadows.
7 - Like this. Criticism; just the lighting and crop. With these two subjects, I wonder if (if possible) a 'colored' lighting scheme could have given this more 'drama', ie; pink glow lighting etc. Just a different cropping (again if possible) to give the 'height' more 'play' and even (and this is more an angle issue) to incorporate some of those 'pink swirls', may have made this a better shot in my opinion.
i think the idea is pretty much a cliche. in terms of execution, i have seen better, and i suppose that's the biggest problem with shooting something that's been shot many, many times before. 5
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