*Critique Club*
I don't really find this particularily interesting. I can't even read what it says. Looks like a very shallow DOF on a computer screen, where very little is in focus and you can't even read any of what is in focus.
I might have liked to see at least one recognizable word in this shot. Either that, or at least have the cursor in focus.
I guess the lighting is ok, no bright spots or distracting shadows.
There really isn't a lot to comment on here.
The green lettering fits in with the whole theme of the movie. I supose it fits the challenge in that aspect, but there really just isn't anything to look at.
Sorry I couldn't be of more help.
~Heather~ |