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04/28/2006 12:29:59 PMPost actions
Is this the work of the great Man Ray? Great pic, boss, really, a great sober nude pic.
10/10/2005 02:59:05 AMPost actions
Very nicely done Al. Glad to see you on here finally.
Judi
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08/28/2005 02:53:05 PMPost actions
I like the pose and composition. I wonder if a different lighting setup could case some interesting shadows across the model's body to add interest.
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08/25/2005 11:26:20 PMPost actions
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08/25/2005 09:07:49 PMPost actions
This is nice but is it supposed to have the ghostly effect? I think the model moved. I think it would have been better without the movement, even if it was ententional.
I wish you luck.
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08/25/2005 11:41:14 AMPost actions
The lighting sculpts the body for the most part. The black area between the body and arm makes the arm look somewhat awkward. The tones of the arm and breast are really close and makes it difficult to separate the two. Maybe moving the light futher back and using a reflector in front would have created more shadowing.
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08/24/2005 10:35:38 PMPost actions
Very lovely shot, and the pose looks just a bit uncomfortable, but not too badly, but the background distraction of the floor makes me take a few points off.
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08/24/2005 06:34:28 PMPost actions
Nice lighting, excellent pose, and very good use of b/w. Perfect focus and excellent curves, nice use of shadows and light. Nicely done.
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08/23/2005 07:30:54 PMPost actions
absolutly gorgeous... lovely soft and feminine... 10 from me....
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08/23/2005 11:07:24 AMPost actions
Tones are too flat for my taste.
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08/23/2005 10:56:34 AMPost actions
Not sure on this one, the lighting just doesn't seem right. The left arm also doesn't realy fit. I think the han'd shouldn't be cropped out.
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08/23/2005 06:16:28 AMPost actions
another strange crop showing either too much or too little. difficult to judge which.
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08/22/2005 11:43:36 PMPost actions
Need smore contrast IMHO. 7
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08/22/2005 10:35:20 PMPost actions
Good color/tone. I think I would have had the far arm up to accentuate the body more.
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08/22/2005 10:04:44 PMPost actions
Good capture. the focus seems a touch soft and I would like to see maybe just a little more contrast.
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08/22/2005 06:34:30 PMPost actions
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08/22/2005 06:31:07 PMPost actions
i like the soft focus in this particualr image. The model looks kind of awkward, like she is about to fall off the bed.
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08/22/2005 12:49:55 PMPost actions
This is a tad too blurred for my taste. Maybe up the light so that it is skimming a bit more and not so indirect. The outstretched neck and shoulder blades are quite pretty. Maybe a zoom in on that might've been a tad more appealing, but maybe that's my taste only. :~D
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08/22/2005 12:30:14 PMPost actions
i think the lighting could be better to give more dimensionality to the body.
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08/22/2005 10:14:23 AMPost actions
Nice lighting and composition! Well done! 8
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08/22/2005 02:49:30 AMPost actions
Nice light and shadows. The pose is a little oddly contorted though.
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08/22/2005 01:11:27 AMPost actions
Hey look! Nurples!!
Seriously, nice soft capture, the relaxed feel of the model translates well into the somewhat sepia tones in this shot. Nice capture.
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