The contrast between the warm, soft skin and sheets contrasts nicely with the cold, hard chain. Although this contrast is interesting, the picture suggests no clear reason for the chain's presence, which I think reduces the impact somewhat. I think that the image would be stronger if the end of the chain weren't visible.
THis is almost a surreal type of shot. I find the details on the ends of the bed distracting. Perhaps a tigher crop would have been better, or maybe a crisper look to the sheets.
Very nice contrast with the hard chains and the soft skin. I think the detail is a bit lacking , and the hot spot on the sheets is a bit odd, but cool.
I think the grain is good for this one. sort of a pj type of shot. I think if the bottom was cropped out it would lend a little more mystery to the story. Some of the whites in the sheet are blown out and have a yellow tint. I just learned last night that cloth is 5 times more reflective than skin so extra care has to be given to avoid overexposure.
INteresting, if not a little kinky or macabre. Only thing I might suggest is to crop mor off the bottom so the end of the chain is not showing. Overall, it does have an artistic flair to it. Good luck.
The lighting seems a little off.... too light in the foreground, too dark in the background. The image also seems a little grainy. Maybe cropping out the bottom section of the image would help. The dark section (bottom right) is a HUGE distraction.
i think the main focal point of the lighting fell on the white sheet instead of the model. interesting conceptual shot, think it could have gone a bit further though. a decent entry never the less.
maybe it would have worked better had the chain been connected to something? as it is, i don't understand why she would wrap a chain around herself just to lie in bed. either way, it has been thought provoking. and despite my confusion it is a lovely photo.
The harshness of the lighting makes this look like a crime scene photo somehow, it also has somewhat of a mid-century vernacular quality about it...definitely one of my favorites.
I think the chain works great in this shot. The way it is wrapped around her body looks good. There is some noticable grain in this photo, but I think it is ok with this darker theme.
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