Greetings from the Critique Club
Hi Jak!
Composition
I like the curve against the straight lines here. The composition leads us into and out of the picture, which is alright.
Color
Hate the post processing - I think devart and photosig are a lot more welcoming to the digital art than dpc - we (me too) tend to dislike "art" and focus as much as we can on "photography." I guess it helps this shot tie into your theme more, but I think it's too much.
Subject matter
Not sure how this is matrixy except the post processing.
Overall
Your score reflected my opinion of this shot - you do some of the best work on dpc, so I am not going to waste your time trying to explain why I think you finished down here. Happy shooting, can't wait to see some more stuff from ya.
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