This is a good idea, but I think could be better executed.
Lighting could be made waay more interesting. I assume this is done with the on camera flash or a light from the right.
If the light was more from the left and was from a window or soft box, you woud get a light shadow on the right showing more contours of the body.
Great Idea, and I lactually like the bikini in the shot. There's really not much I can say to improve it. I think a solid contrasting color of a bikini might have been more basic, and clean. Good luck.
Nice curve. I like the color splash the bikini adds to the photo. Nice lighting. I think a healthy dose of water droplets on the model would help to define the skin and give texture. Overall nice photo.
Nothing very interesting about this photograph. Doesn't bring any emotions, colours are normal and to my eyes, doesn't quite reflect the 'Nude' theme. Composition is non-existant. 4
I like the concept of this shot. My only suggestion would be to move the model's side to one of the vertical 3rds lines. I think this would give the shot a more interesting balance. This crop creates an interesting abstract which I like.
Funny how you see the old woman's profile or the glass? I still remember that illusion. This is the same - at first I couldn't figure it out. This is smart and very clear. I don't find it outstandingly interesting, but it is well shot and focused well. 7
I like that you effectively cut the image in half. The lighting is a little flat but focus and DOF are great. I think a POV a little lower would serve the image better.
Seems to me this could've been done without showing the bikini and not revealing anything either. In fact, I think it would've made for an excellent sillhouette. Good luck.
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