Kudos for Magnús for suggesting the crop. This is a gold pin inside a blue glass - mostly refelctions. The only part that is "solid" is the loop in the bottom right.
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They might as well just assign your entire portfolio to me. lol I've gotten the last 3. :)
This is such a simple shot, yet very effective. The color is great, and definately fits the challenge in my opinion. Blue/Orange.
Abstracts are hard for me to comment on sometimes. Most of the time focus is unimportant in an abstract, but there are parts here that I can see have good focus. The center of the photo along the bottom for example.
I like how this splits the photo. Not right in the center, but off center a bit, and also the bit of blue reflections that go over the orange looks nice as well.
I like how it seems to swirl together. While I'm not usually a huge fan of abstracts, I'm liking this one quite a bit. Excellent creativity and execution.
If I HAD to make a suggestion for improvement, I would mention that the little speckles throughout the shot are a minor distraction, and I'd find a way to remove those. Now that the challenge is done. Editing is definately an option.
~Heather~
Honestly - have no idea what I am looking at, but know I like it!. Great job - makes you want to keep looking at it. Love the composition and cropping, and think it looks great without a border. Hope you do very well in the challenge:)
Okay, this is just plain cool. I know, that's not a terribly useful comment, but it is my reaction. I like the way that the outer top to inner center edges flow light to dark in equivalent contrast levels, very nice emphasis (whether intentional or not).
I see photos like this and I like abstracts more and more. Even though I think it is slightly dark I really like the colors and the composition. I'm not quite sure about the wide cropping though. -T