My friends told me they wanted to practice outside for once and I thought it would be a perfect opportunity to take a stab at this challenge. So we went to the park and they did their thing.
I used desat/black and white, adjusted contrast and curves.
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To me it never looks right to have a model on a third line facing out of the frame. It makes me feel that I'm missing something. Kinda like you're cheating me outa half the view...
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Love the expressions on their faces. You've included a lot of background space which fits in with your title, but I wonder if you'd have got more impact by zooming in on their faces & guitars. It might have made for a more powerful photo... just a thought.
Like the work you've done on the colors after. Nice touch.
I,m not sure if the color seems right. I do know that it sets a mood and I have been looking at it for quite a while now. It has a drawing effect. I like it. Great effort.
Texture of the grass looks oversharpened. Burnt out sky is not effective. I don't get much of a sense of hearing the music they're playing, especially as the bass player isn't doing anything. Composition doesn't work for me. Strange muted colours. They just seem very very bored.
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