These are two of the four "California Girls" onstage at the San Mateo County Fair, California, playing a surfer riff. Just did some basic levels and curves here. There are a number of things I don't like with this shot but this is the best of my set and since this is only my third entry I decided to enter it anyway to see how it'd score. I should have framed it better to remove the empty space between the characters and the color lights on top; made sure the guitar was not framed off; and compensated correctly for the sunlight beaming in from the left.
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Composition is all over the place, not sure what we're meant to be focusing on. Bassist looking out of the frame leads viewer's eye out of the photo. I'm missing the headstock on the bass. Placement of subjects in photo feels very unbalanced.
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