I think this image has too much noise... best run it through Neat image to rid of the noise... the way the image is cropped is somewhat ineffective IMHO... there are black areas to the right of the frame that could go away and the sign at the top is cut off... it ditracts from the image a bit... 5
I think you were successful in establishing a mood in this piece, but I think that the focus works against you. Also, the colors seem a little washed out - no pun intended. Still, like I said, you certainly created an emotive shot.