You've mimicked the overall feel really well, I do have to say. Two things that really stand out to me as differences are the sharpness on your model (yours are softer at the focal points than Jinky Arts), and the lighting (These seem a little flat to me.) With a little more work in the sharpness and contrast areas (with a boost in overall lighting), I think you'd really hit the mark. As it is, they're great shots, but as I said, those are two critical points that I see and feel fall a little short.
I love your eye and your feel for child portraiture though. We're hoping to move away from child portraitures in the next few assignments (We never really wanted to focus on it, but most people here have kids and seemed to stick with them, so Jinky Art felt like a natural choice).
So get ready to show us your studio work :) |
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