Perhaps a good concept, but there are too many flaws. The intense lens flare is very distracting and hides most of the phone, while the rest is overexposed and out of focus/blurred.
(Donning my sunglasses) if this were a bit less intense with the brightness and a bit more focused I would have scored it higher. Good idea to potray 2005 though.
It looks like you reflected a flash off of the flip-up screen of the phone. I'm trying to figure out why you have motion blur, unless it's just out of focus.