*Critique Club*
There is something creating a purpleish pink tint to her forhead. And I'm not sure that is very appealing. I tried this with a crop just above her eye brows, and I think that works nicely too.
The purple makeup under her eyes, makes her look like she's either been crying a lot, or like she's got real bad allergies or something. not really something common.
There is a yellow area on the bridge of her nose, that looks like it was a lighting glitch or something. Maybe a harsh reflection of light. Some skin colored powder could cut down on the ammount of glare on her face. She does have a glare on her forhead as well.
I like the white negative space. I think that it actually helps us focus on her face a bit. Kind of like "oh, nothing over here...lets look at the girl".
Focus and clarity are great. You have good detail in her face. We can see individual eye lashes, and that's good.
~Heather~
I like the compositoin, the model is cute, but the purple under the eyes makes her look ill. Sorry just my thoughts. Still a very effective shot. Jscko. 8