*Critique Club*
This is a good setup. I like the green, orange, and purple you have chosen, and it looks very natural and yummy looking.
The lighting seems to be good on the oranges and lettuce, but the egg plant is creating a bit of a glare.
The focus and clarity are ok, but because of the glare on the eggplant, it seems a bit softer than the oranges and lettuce. I like how we can see the texture in the oranges.
I think I would like to see this with the top section of lettuce cropped. So there is just one bin showing. I like the arrangement. It looks like it was just thrown in there naturally, not set up to be a "still life" kind of shot. Which I think is what makes this shot different.
~Heather~
I'm not sure what it is about this picture..maybe the arrangement is chaotic without any story to tell? Perhaps if you concentrated on just the eggplant and the green leaves it would be stronger?
at first this looked really snapshotty to me.... but the more i look at it the more it looks photo jurnalisty....... not sure why... i think it is the angles..... anyway... good luck...... 7
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