Maybe a bit dark, good focus, are we birthing? What are we doing? The suspense is killing me. What is he intense about? Photo 8 Creativity 6 B&W 7 total 7
A nice portrait, with good title. I think this photo could be improved further with some post processing to add some more contrast, it's too much gray and gray for my liking at the moment.
Good B/W (an all photography, really) is all about light, and the ugliest light known to man (except possibly flourescent) is, for some reason, built into most cameras. It's very hard and directional, which flattens textures, and casts horrid shadows nine times out of ten. The party headwrap would have me worried if this were my surgeon, unless I was 7. For intensity, maybe you could zoom in on his eyes.