you have GREAT skills no doubt about that! But your subject isn't interesting. Your picture is hard to understand. The viewer (or maybe just me) cannot relate to it? golf club?
The double figure certainly works, but the setting in which it is done isn't that interesting. The posters, calendar and golf club are a bit distracting from the idea. Maybe if you staged it and cleared away the clutter, the simplicity would have really given it more effect. I hope you find this helpful. Good luck in the challange.
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