This is avery nice study. My only suggestion is since there is little movement to determine the shortest exposure possible with the lowest ISO. This will reduce the noise. Outside of this you have my praise for a lovely sweet image. 6
When entering a photo for a challenge you should always check to see if its level. I find the tilt in this photo to be off and it throws the balance off. The focus is a little soft and I'm not fond of the subjects but it does fit the challenge. Good luck in this challenge. <5>
I think I would remove the pictures on the wall for a bit more simplicity and no distraction from the movement of the figures. I like the title and the blue light in the window.
Fit Challenge Criteria: 2/2
Color/Contrast: 1/2
Composition: 1/2
Photo Quality: 0/2
My Subjective Affinity: 0/2
This is a really nice idea. I don't like the top picture fram being cut off, or the blue light on the sleepers face. There is also a lot of noise in the photo.
Very well done. Would have tried to take some of the background out, though. The blinds are distracting. Takes away from the meaning of the image. Perhaps a different angle, or shutting the drapes. They are spotted, which would have given a more defined feel to the concept of dreaming.
I like the idea, Ill bet you could have taken this a step further and thrown in more "far out" things to add to the dream effect. Ie put household items in clothes and duct tape them to various parts of the walls or maybe have more floating things.
Those are more of requests than comments, I like your photo the way it is too!
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