As a photo I find it a little too busy. As interesting as it is the clarity puts it into the abstract sort of view which isn't a bad thing just not my liking. Good luck in this challenge. <5>
Very disturbing image. You did a great job of depicting any of various maladies connected to the mind. I would like to see this idea worked with a little more, though. I don't think it is the very best it could be. Not sure how to change it. If you have a manual setting for long exposure, maybe putting the cap back on between the movement of the face would have givien it a better affect.