*Critique Club*
In asking for an in depth comment from the CC, I think it would be beneficial to include some details of what you were trying to accomplish here.
I have no clue what this is, nor does it really appeal to me. yeah, there are a few secondary colors, but they aren't really interesting at all. Not being able to tell what it is, where it is or WHY it is there really depreciates the value of this shot in my opinion.
The white line seperating the photo in half doesn't really add anything either. It's not really well ballanced, and my attention is drawn more to that bright white line than to the circular things. (which I assume was suposed to be your main focus)
It looks like a post processing filter was used. I say this because of the strange look of the white line in the center, and the outline of the circular object to the far left.
Overall, this is really not my cup of tea. Sorry.
~Heather~
Very interesting image. Nice ideas. . .this image looks abstract and it really catches your eye. There is also a lot of texture and pattern in the image. Good job.
Spent some time with this one, and whilst its different, it doesnt do anything for me. Its just some blobby shapes and scratches without inliciting a mood or feeling. Perhaps removing the large white thing in the middle would help.
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