Returning for comment. I gave you a 5 only because of a few things and I will explain:
First: I think it is too tight of a crop. Step back a little and get more of the bathtub.
Second: I really don't care too much for the soft focus but didn't count off a lot for that only because it is personal opinion. It also appears that the candle in the back is totally out of focus. A bigger DOF would also help.
Third: If you had stepped back a little and had a subject in the tub I feel this would get your point across a lot better than it does now. Maybe someone in there reading a book or just with their eyes closed and their head rested on the tub.
Fourth: Once that was done I would get a lower POV.
I really hope this helps. Good luck in all your future challenges. |
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