The spinning top is a nice idea, but I think you got some camera shake along with it. The background is fuzzy as well, and over-brightened. It's colorful, but I'm not sure why the box on the left is in the photo. Good luck!
As interesting as the photo is I don't like it. I'm not sure if its the clarity issue or the brightness level. Perhaps a little slower shutter speed would have made for a better photo. Good luck in this challenge. <5>
great composition. the similiarly patterened box in the corner with lines leading to the top. the box being the straight object and the top being all wobbly. not sure i described that in very artistic terms. also the subdued colors and noise are just perfect in my mind. i wish your title gave me more faith in the planning of the shot, but perhaps i'm just misunderstanding it. all in all, very intriguing work. also in regards to composition i like how both objects are cut by the borders.