The line in the top right is distracting, and the edge at the front of the metronome is out of focus. Whilst you've given us some nice detail here, I would have preferred to see more/all of the metronome. I can't help feeling that a slow shot of the whole hand sweeping out part of its arc would meet your title better, and give some movement to the shot.
I think I'd pan back a bit so you could see more of the metronome. Or maybe crop out the brass ring on the right and show more of the other aspects of it. I find that ring a tad distracting. You did shoot it from a good angle though - not straight on. I hope this helps.
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