A very refreshing and creative approach to the challenge. A nice clean purposeful composition. A slight suggestion for improvement, maybe show more of the man's face. There is such a great expression on the boy, so intense and focused on the job at hand, I think if you could see the man's face as well would really help drive the story.
Nice picture of a tender moment as one passes on their trade to the young generation. Although I would have liked to see more of Grandpa's face and what they were making, you have captured the moment well.
Both faces of concentration would be really great to see. I'd love more contrast - push those blacks all the way to black and you'll have a stronger photo
nice capture. Good to see some wood working, and the memories / bonding that is happening here is priceless. Would have been better if the man's face wasn't hidden.
I like the idea but would prefer to see a little more of the tutor's face. A tad bit more contrast would help bring out some of the more subtle detail aswell.
would have been cool to see grandpas face too, maybe this could use a bit more contrast also thoose face shadows are often a pain, But I know you probably couldnt move them, its a good moment
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