What groggy said: you got to desat the exposed part of the rock as well. Then you're good to go.
It's a nice shot. Technically, I am having problems with the vertical shadow on the right wall falling onto the adjacent plane. It's impossible to tell where one wall ends and the other bgegins, so the juxtaposition of these two planes is fuzzily-expressed. Had the light been allowed to come around a hair more to your left, you could have it raking what's now the shadowed surcae, and this would be MUCH more expressive of the shapes & volumes here. |