The damask fabric on the chaise is a bit busy. I wish it were a solid color. Then you could maybe focus on the texture of the pillow (rug?) she is holding. I'd zoom in more on her body and maybe sharpen it up a bit. I like the window - the light might be a tad harsh. I hope this is helpful.
for the challenge, the emotion of feeling a texture doesn't substitute for the actual texture(s) imo. nice moody lighting and the softness works, as well as the b/w.