Ick, he is struggling! I love the focus on the gorilla with the use of a blur background and his texture is amazing. This photo shows just how human-like animals all are and that we all suffer from the "fly in the eye" sometimes. Great capture.
Nice detail, dof & composition. Funny too, and I always say, show me the funny! What would I have done differently? Um, spelled eye with a capital 'E'... j/k
Great catch, and it should be a top finisher! [10]
This might be more effective with some additional contrast. Black and white would be a nice filter for this shot as well. The focus and detail is well shot.
Since I am lacking in technical skills, I cannot give helpful comments. I am strictly a photo buff who is trying to improve, but as to telling you what is wrong or right, I am in no position to say. I am simply voting based on whether I like the picture or not. Sorry, maybe someday I will be able to give helpful advice