This is one of those shots that grows on you, the more you look at it the more yousee and the more you appreciate it. The facial expression is just awesome.
Since I am lacking in technical skills, I cannot give helpful comments. I am strictly a photo buff who is trying to improve, but as to telling you what is wrong or right, I am in no position to say. I am simply voting based on whether I like the picture or not. Sorry, maybe someday I will be able to give helpful advice