Challenge:Black & White (Classic Editing) Camera:Canon PowerShot A40 Location: In Backyard, Perth Western Australia Date: May 28, 2002 Aperture: F3.5 ISO: 50 Shutter: 1/10 Date Uploaded: May 30, 2002
Focus is good, but were you going for a messy, jumbled effect? Probably got alot of too dark comments, I would rather put it as too gloomy. Photo 8 Creativity 6 B&W 6 total 7
Yup, that's the inside of a shed alright. But why should I care? I don't see a real point of interest, just a bunch of stuf fon shelves and lying around.
I think I would have ignored the "true" highlights (the flecks of white on the window), and used something like that large table on the left as my highlight base to work a little of the flatness out of the photo. Most of this seems fairly grey and I think some differentiation would help.
You need to clean up that shed! ;-) Even though there's nothing really white or black inside the shed, the contrast is pretty good. The glare from the light on the windows add to this shot. What is the actual focus, my eye keeps wandering but not really staying anywhere.
I'd like it a little brighter, but the tonal range is pretty good and it's nice and sharp. The window makes a nice frame. What if there were something to see in the shed?
Uh, need some help cleaning that thing out? Seriously though, I wonder if a slave flash with some sort of diffuser could be used to improve the lighting inside.
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