** Greetings form the Critique Club **
Composition is strong here, a great use of negative space. The color cast however is too yellow throughout. I am assuming you were going for the warm tone feeling, but you are lacking the warmth of reds. The model looks to possibly have red hair - would have loved to see the color come through more. The facial expression does not say independence to me, or freedom from routine. It looks too posed - like a waxed museum piece. The eyes are fixed into a stare. Would have been more convincing if the model was in a more relaxed, care free pose.
- Linda |
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