Challenge:Glass (Classic Editing) Camera:Fujifilm FinePix A201 Location: At home Date: May 3, 2003 Aperture: 4.4 ISO: 100 Shutter: 0.033493 Date Uploaded: May 3, 2003
thanks for the comments,they are very helpful.
note: the reason the window seems overexposed is because there is plastic on the other side so there is nothing but white.
To really add some interest to this shot, I think it may have been better to get much closer and capture just the corner with the paint. Also, it seems a bit over exposed, so maybe waitiing until a different time of day would have help.
I see you have kept the window vertical, however there is frame? to the left which is not - would have cropped it out as it distracts. Would also have considered another subject as there is not much else here that catches my attention.
Clever concept / title. The execution fell a bit short though... The trim on the left is very distracting (the slant) and the white (curtain?) on the right doesn't really add anything.
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