If it were mine I'd maybe crop to centre it (or make it more off centre...either one) and lighten it enough to silhouette the stem. but that's just me. very nice shot.
i think this is way too dark to be effective... I think it would have been quite a good shot but I would like to see the stem and the sides of the glass..... alternatively crop the base out.... but I think ligter would far stronger visually.... good luck, Todd.
I would like this more if there were perhaps more details of the glass lit up - the stem in particular. Tricky lighting situation. I do like what you've done with the red and the "smoky" effect at the top, however.