There is no clear point of focus in this image. The focus seems sharpest on the bright white headstone, but since it's occluded by the larger items in the foreground it's probably not the intended subject. A much narrower DOF and composition which clearly indicated the intended subject would have helped this image dramatically.
a truth that few of us will give credit to.. great pic for the challenge. i would just recommend you try one thing, make the dof much smaller to get rid of a somewhat distracting background.
Nice picture...the grainy B&W is fitting here. I would have liked to see more detail on the gravestones though. Being able to read the stones would have been more meaningful, I think, instead of the rest of the cemetary in the background.