Not bad at all but it seems a little bit soft or even out of focus and also a bit flat, I would suggest an "s-curve" and some sharpening and I bet you would like the outcome more. Lovely family you got there.
The aspect ratio seems off in this picture; you appear to have compressed everyone horizontally. In general, pictures of people are much stronger if you can see their eyes. I can't clearly make out the eyes of anyone in this photo. This is partially because of the angle of the light from above; using a fill flash might have provided enough light to bring out their eyes.
Nice subject and lovely surrounding. Looks like you´ve streched the image a litle up and down. Think you could have made it better bye pop up the lightning and the colorsaturation a litle and maybe litle more usm.
i like that you have the road leading off to a good focal point so this pic isn't totally centered. it seems you might have distorted things when you resized it. the lighting is tough, but next time try to expose for their faces (currently under exposed) so you have better detail in them which i assume would be your main point of interest in this shot. the lighting is low so you need to be really firm when holding the camera because in this instance your focus is soft (blurry).
Their bodies seem elongated from top to bottom. Maybe it's just me. Great overall capture of them - nice and natural. I'm going to elaborate on this one. The composition is well shot but the lighting is a tad dim and there isn't any POW factor on their faces. The varying heights is good, but overall, it could use some tweaking. Hope this helps.
not sure what happened here - or if it was intentional -but the people look distorted...stretched upwards. While it does give each family member a more thinning appearance it just looks off as even the faces look stretched out.
Perhaps when you resized you forgot to check the "constrain" box?