Well I guess I'll start with the lighting, it is a little harsh causing dark shadows most noticeable under the chin. There is a lot of reflection off the person's face.
There doesn’t appear to have much effort put into the photo, it looks like a snapshot when you where messing around with some buddy’s. Showing the object that hit him would have help as well as stepping back to capture more of your subject. Because you are so close his head seams to be disproportioned to his shoulders as well.
The background doesn’t help the photo either you lose the persons hair in it. The dots next to his mouth are distracting as well. Lighting would have helped this as well. If you were trying to convey boxing try hinting at it in the background too, Like maybe seeing people sitting behind red white and blue ropes.
I hope this has helped feel free to PM me if you have any questions or would like more clarification on anything. Thank you.
Would have been more in context if you could have seen part of the boxing glove or whatever it was that hit him. Doesnt fit category as it stands here.
(1-2) Below Average (3) Average (4-5) Above Average
Challenge Relevance 2:
Contrast / Colors :3
Creativity / Originality :2
Composition / Eye Appeal: 1
a little blood would have been nice.
Good expression and sense of movement however if the fist were shown in the picture and the zoom was a little less the message would come across much better.
all i can say is "what an interesting take on the challenge". i have no idea what this is conveying--it almost looks like someone with their faced smashed up against a window...
you might want to check out this thread. good luck!
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