Hmm...what sort of car is this? its a shiney engine, so maybe if you either shot closer or even wider we'd have a bit of context, but I suspect you were going for the abstract feel of an engine, in which case, zoom on in and go a bit to your left to get a better view on those cool engine parts, rather than cutting off the corners of it. :)
a v16? How odd. What kind of car is this? Ohh I see now. Very very clever. I love the colors but I think the composition is a bit cluttered. Not sure how you could have made it better tho... 8