The vertical lines in this shot seems to cut it up. The contrast is over all okay, but I wish there was more light on the subjects face. Still something eyecatching about this photograph though.
Needs more brightness. The highlights on the bag are pure white, but the rest of the image is too dark. The man's hair blends into the shadows behind him, and the wall is very flat (tonally).
The blank wall becomes the focus. I would have cropped this with a vertical orientation rather than horizontal. That way there would still be the blank wall, but not so much of it.
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