OK, first I must say I'm really glad to have this picture to critique because I like it a lot. :)
Let's talk of the subject first. I like the distance you took towards the theme picturing this child. She (he?) is definitely being transported, but this is not the typical pic you would expect for the transportation theme. Kudos for choosing an original subject, I like that a lot.
Technically I don't see too much to improve. The composition is great: not to show the parent behind was mandatory for this picture to work. The angle is good too. To kneel down would have been a mistake when the subject was this child being transported. I also like the negative space on the left. This is important to convey the idea of transportation. Once again, vey well done.
About the child's expression, it is perfect. She (he) doesn't seem to care a lot, this child seems more interested about what's going on around. Goes perfectly with the general idea of this pic, this child is being transported no matter what.
About the choice of black and white, I think it is a good move since the color definitely doesn't add anything to the idea you wanted to convey.
Another shot I'm so sorry to see so low on the votes...
Congratulations, this is a great shot. Don't believe your score... :)
i like this shot for the expression on the kid's face! lol it's all attitude! I am amused by the pole in the shot too to get the little trike to "pop a wheelie" ;) There is too much "nothing" to the left in my opinion, so I might have cropped a little more on that side to put more attention on our little hell's angel. :)
very nice work, the black and white makes the picture look great. i like your choice of subject, it make the image very cute. I like the fact that she is not smiling, it jus make the image better because it not so cliche'. Good job 9
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