Challenge:Black & White (Classic Editing) Camera:Sony DSC-F707 Location: Norristown, PA Date: May 27, 2002 Aperture: ? ISO: Auto Shutter: ? Date Uploaded: May 28, 2002
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Wow! Thanks to everyone for voting on my first pic. Was pleasantly surprised at how well it placed. I appreciate all the great comments and hope to one day have a ribbon here as I learn tips from all you fabulous shooters on here.
I feel sorry for this girls dad. He is going to have to threaten so many young boys.
Besides the young ladies looks this is a nice portrait, soft focus, and good tones. I think the hair blowing is a bit much but nothing that would deter my rating of this shot.
Very good! I give this one a high score. I like the wind blown hair effect. Lighting is generally good, but there are some shadows that break up the back lighting a bit.
Pretty good model shoot. Nice use of lighting, good focus, nice contrasts all around. Sorry, but I have no constructive remarks. Photo 9 Creativity 6 B&W 9 total 7
Good 'tude on her, and I like the motion blur on her hair - gives her some motion. The shadows on the bg are a little distracting, esp at R. If you'd moved her a little closer to the camera, they might have landed out of frame. The whites (except for the blowouts on the collar and sleeve) look a little dingy.
You're good at this kind of photography, but it's not something I like much. I'd rather be shown who she is than what she looks like with nice makeup and windswept hair.
When is your birthday and where do you live? =) Other than that, the shot is very nice, she looks young but sexy. The hair blowing is a nice detail considering the title. But something is missing. B&W is SUCH a great 'tool'. A little more dramatic lighting would have made this a 10.
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