The large blurry object being so up front in the frame, and taking up more then half the image, really draws my eye to it - so my eye is looking at a blurry blob.
I would suggest that instead with this image, that you switch your focus - have the back object blurry, and your front object in focus. Would make viewing easier on my eyes.
I still haven't figured out what this is? :) I like this very much, it is very interesting. The only complaint that I have, is that the image seems a tad overprocessed.