Challenge:Black & White (Classic Editing) Camera:Sony DSC-S75 Location: Front of Masterson Station Subdivision Date: May 28, 2002 Aperture: F6.3 ISO: 100 Shutter: 1/500 Date Uploaded: May 28, 2002
Bet they play a lot of cards...nice array of different textures -- I might have even kept a bit more of the lamp in the lower-left for contrast with all the herbiage...
I just can't relate -- typically people are turned on to things that they can relate to. A picture of the sign out side of someone's apartment complex (that isn't their own) isn't something that people will be able to relate to.
First, I can't say the subject matter really grabs me. Beyond that, a slightly tighter cropping job to remove the sidewalk at the bottom and the light in the lower left might be a good idea.
It's sharp, but the floodlight and sliver of sidewalk detract. More contrast (added brightness, IMO) might make it more interesting, but (again, IMO) the subject murmers "dull".
This is decent composition with the exception of the sidewalk working its way into the photo in the lower right part of the frame.. i think that removing the lamp fixture from the left would have been nice also... Maybe a crop down to just eh log, the sign, and a little greenery behind it?
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