Creative image. I do believe that the image needs to be focused a bit more though. It also needs some value in it. Maybe if there were clouds or the sky sun was setting or something. It just seems to need something more. But nice job.
Out an airplane window? You probably should have spent a little more time on this, (or at least crop the black (window) off the bottom of the pic. Sorry, better luck next week.
Interesting framing from the window at the bottom from the image. It would have worked better if the framing had been completely around the image or else without any framing at all.