The first shot seems like an awkward fit for the sequence, since the other two shots have the same perspective but the first is different (without any particular reason for being different). Also each of these shots are really too small to be effective.. with such limited space in the first place, you might have been better off using a much smaller boarder.
Very colorful with an interesting choice of POV! The big black border gives brings lots of contrast to the photo. You captured the action of the man quite well. Good job.
Nice story, good color. Focus seems very good, but due to the size of the frames, some of the detail is harder to see. I think the first frame works best, but I have no idea how to replicate that for the other two frames. 7 Rob the Swash
Golf rocks. I'll be hitting the links in about 2 weeks. My recommendation: first shot top of back swing, second shot ball strike, third shot follow through. Just a different take. Nice action shot. Jacko. 7
- you need to let your arms hang more naturally at address, unless this is the Natural Golf System - widen that stance a little more with the driver
- at halfway down your hips should be cleared out fully
- posture good, nice full release of the club at impact