Composing an image is nearly as important as shooting in focus. I think the composition needs work. Do many different set ups and take a lot of still lifes such as this one, to see which one really demands you use it compositionally.
What'swith the fruit in this image? I don't get it, sorry. Also lighting and background just don't work for me. Maybe a closeup of the front of the camera would have worked better IMHO.
after some painflu staring, i have come to the conclusion it is a camera! On your deck out back...deck is abit bright, camera a bit dark. too much dynamic range here. The fruit bits...i have no clue. the one is behind the camera...why? the pic has a haze to it as well, the fruit is not vibrant, but washed out in color.